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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Thu Apr 30, 2009 6:35 pm

I know eh, its taking a while.
Maybe hes compressing his rhymes into a pile?
They might even put you on trail.
This better be worthwhile..

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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:13 pm

IDK wolf, he has proven us wrong
His rhymes are light while his poems are long
But thats not what we do, we take our time
To develop something that is considered a crime

Im not gonna talk a lot, i gotta stay fresh
So when cano "comes back", ill eat his every flesh
Not in a homo way, more like a figurative thought
But it doesnt matter cause talent is the only thing i brought

I sorta wanna stop, but im getting used to this
I havent done it in a while, i really do miss
i remember the beefing that escalated into war
In a sense of rhymes, not with guns and gore

There can be so many things to cano i can say
Maybe about how he changed in a whole new way
Maybe about how he wants sammy to live
Maybe about how his love for samy is something he'll never give...
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Sun May 03, 2009 10:33 pm

You can't buy talent, talent is made
Your skills in-game are some sort of charade

Love isn't a game, love for a brother ain't lame
Straight or gay its all the same

You REALLY should stop
We can war any time
XcanoX's makin his come back on the hop
Either way you still can't ryhme.....
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Mon May 04, 2009 2:51 pm

holy crap, ima take a nap! Cool

lol i cant believe this game is still goin on
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Mon May 04, 2009 3:42 pm

Cano..
My Mano.
Whats going on?
It seems you have withdrawn.

If I dont see a poem in the next few days.
Me and Unit will receive the praise.
Whats with the delays?
I want to set you ablaze.

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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Mon May 04, 2009 6:59 pm

Oh god, what a noob to the game
I giggled when his "rhymes" got lame
But atleast he tried to insult the General
This game got serious, it's conidered Federal

Who were you talking to when you said they cant rhyme?
It surely cant be me, especially during me prime
Now i know there isnt a "spellcheck", but atleast proof read
The typos and spelling errors are making my eyes bleed
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Tue May 05, 2009 7:42 am

u just been phoned, by that i mean owned
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Tue May 05, 2009 12:27 pm

SHUT UP!
I'M WORKING ON THE POEM!
JEEZ! BUNCHA IMPATIENT BUMHOLES!
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Tue May 05, 2009 7:46 pm

Is it hard to read? It says the POEM GAME
To participate, you first start off with your name
You take us on and you try to raise your rank
Then you eventually get blown to bits like a tank

Come on noobs, just try to rhyme in AABB form
They dont have to be hott, but atleast warm
But the last thing you want to do is think your the best
Or you'll end up burned to bits like the rest

I have patience, but your five days overdue
I knew that you coming back was too good to be true
I forgive you though, you cant win against the kings
It's as hopeless like a bird trying to fly with broken wings

I've said this many times before, this game i dead
Me and Wolf are won, we hold crowns on our head
You can't snatch it away, its just complete suicide
And if you get carried away, we will commit homocide
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Wed May 06, 2009 10:12 am

I've heard enough of that
you ungratefull brat.
I'm working it up.
And that's that.

Just give me one more week.
I promise it wont be meek.
I'll try to get it done.
I'm gonna make you shreak!
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Wed May 06, 2009 3:31 pm

FYI guys, poems dont have to ryme Sleep
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Wed May 06, 2009 5:38 pm

Your right AERO, but these poems do
This tests to see if your rhymes are true
Even though the game is dead, it may have some breath
Maybe enough to save cano from death

Sorry to say your name cano, but i have to point
Because your lack of skills is what i have to appoint
that and that in the same section? Thats not right
It actually hurts to see you rhyme that i wish i lost my sight
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Wed May 06, 2009 5:46 pm

I like pie! Does anyone defy?
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Sat May 09, 2009 6:17 pm

Someone might as well stab this game with a knife
This game has been wanting to lose it's life
Noobs entered to further murder this game
Rest in Peace Poems Game, you gave us our fame
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Mon May 11, 2009 5:17 pm

Guys...
As much as I hate to say this;
I'm going through some stuff. I don't have time to work on my poem.
So you're gonna have to wait a few months until I move.
Sorry for the inconvenionce!
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Mon May 11, 2009 6:26 pm

cano, im not trying to bring you down on your tought time,
But would it have killed you to put that statement into a rhyme?
I could restate what you said in a poem or two
Remember man, this isnt meant to diss you
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PostSubject: Lets bring the best back.   Tue May 26, 2009 5:05 pm

Lets bring some of this rap back.
Right into the mack.
I been missin this killen.
This room has been chillen.

Cano promised a rhyme.
But we didn't get anything this time.
Try rhyming when listening to rap.
It makes you feel like your brains takin a nap.

I don't know what to write.
I need a challenge tonight.
You know whats a sad song, Stan.
Hope that didn't actually happen to a man.

Eminem is pretty sick though.
His rhymes really flow.
Just like mine.
You could say we intertwine.

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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Tue May 26, 2009 6:31 pm

Wolf tried revive the Game
But failed for his rhymes are lame
Sorry to disappoint you my dame
FoR Now coldcHris is in THe Game
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Tue May 26, 2009 6:38 pm

Oh Romeo.

You may be able to beat me in the game.
But here is where I make my fame.
I would love to see you try to take me.
You getting destroyed is something I can guarantee.

So if you want to go.
Just send a rhyme my way bro.
I think you should.
But maybe I misunderstood?

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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Tue May 26, 2009 7:16 pm

oH Juliet

Thou still have fate to win
Art thou aware thy chances of winning are dim
Nay,for thou needs to be beaten down
to realize i will take thy crown

thou hath the audacity to challenge me
thou will see defeat
for i will be victorious
do thou not know im notorious
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Tue May 26, 2009 8:29 pm

I dare not step in, this isnt my fight
Even myself is afraid to release my might
Seeing me destroy can be a scarring sight
That's all for now, im retiring for tonight
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PostSubject: Now im in your assets.   Wed May 27, 2009 2:13 pm

Unit just made a bad move.
Now I have something to prove.
I'll deal with Chris later.
I'll control him like a dictator.

I have to deal with someone other than you.
His name even starts with a U.
He doesn't know what he just started.
Does he think I'm half retarded?

I'm coming at you worse then Chris.
When you read this check your pants for piss.
Your going to have a look on your face.
A look of Utter disgrace.

Mr. Shady shades slushy boy.
My army is about to deploy.
You tried to use Chris as a decoy.
I'm about to burn down Illinois.

Smash me you will try.
But your rhymes lack supply.
Sometimes I just wonder why.
Why you even bother sending a reply.

I'll make this 2v1
Even more fun.
Don't leave yet I'm not done.
The battle has just begun.

Should I dare say this?
Say something about your sis?
Nah, I'm not like that.
There are better ways to combat.

Don't ever talk about my sister again.
The right to do that you will not obtain.
If you try major damage you will retain.
You'd better learn how to use your brain.

Whats this about me and 7 times.
You want to talk about my rhymes?
Well then lets talk.
Before I seek you out like a hawk.

I talk shit to make you want to come back.
I wait for the right time then I attack.
I take your dead rhymes and hide them in a sack.
Save them for later to eat for a snack.

They may not taste very good.
I eat the ones that are not understood.
Your rhymes don't compare to mine.
They don't intertwine.

I'll end this now to save your disgrace.
You shouldn't have messed with me in the first place.
What happened to your brain, is it wasted space?
Looks like were at it again, ace vs second base.

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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Wed May 27, 2009 4:02 pm

There's so much to say, i cant even start
All this thinking is making my brain fart
It's trying to hit a bullseye like a dart
But it needs new tools like going to the mart

I still havent decided what i should talk about
Should it be about your poems smelling like trout?
Or about your poems making evryone want to shout
Not in a joyful way, in a bad way, thats no doubt

Notice how my rhyme scheme is staying on track?
It doesnt shift forms, they're the opposite of whack
Too bad your poems make my eye sight go black
But you're right, we are going to take a trip back

1v1, 2v1, either way you cant do it like me.
I went against little sammy, young cano, and thee
If you can't count, those opponents add up to three
I stung all of you guys like an angry ass bee

You shot the first bullet, now ill turn you into a fool
Mainly your rhymes since you think they're so cool
I wouldnt be suprised if you wrote them down in school
You probably stayed after class sitting on that stool

You cant deal with chris, he's a god you cant beat
You're lucky he retired, he would cook you up to eat
He would shatter the bones and just chew the meat
He would digest you raw, he doesnt need to heat

Chris will defeat you, you cant run like a bunny
Although i admit that sight would be pretty funny
You may think your rhymes are as sweet as honey
But chris's rhymes can turn the devil into money

i can predict what your ext poem will be like
It'll say something how i shouldnt talk on the mic
Or how my rhymes can make Neil fall off his bike
Or you might say that i should quit and take a hike

You're predictable, you talk about the same thing
Mainly about how you're rhymes are the king
Sometimes about how you own all of the "bling"
But that proof is something i havent seen you bring

Recently you challenged me to a one verse one
I'm not gonna brag saying that i already won
I admit that the challenge will end up being fun
But i have to ask, do you want it rare or well done???

"Now im in your assets"... umm thats good to know
That last poem provoked me to nod my head, "no"
I cant believe i had to attend to that horrible show
Next time ill remind myself not to stand up and go

After i read, i checked my pants and nothing was there
Dont worry, I didnt cheat and changed my underwear
That insult was ugly like Brittney Spears with no hair
Oops, did i go too far? Sorry, but i dont really care

What kind of world would this be if i didnt reply?
Would this finally give the chance for pigs to fly?
You're correct, the question you should ask is why
Its because this is so easy that i dont even have to try.

Well here i am finally finishing my long rhyme.
You're better off going to Mount Everest to climb.
You say the word i use too much is the word prime
Well that's just where i'm at, ill see you at Halftime.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Sun May 31, 2009 1:35 pm

Guess I'll take you down part by part.
Laughing at how you used mart.
Seems like you really did have a brain fart.
You missed the bulls eye, you didn't even make it on the chart.

My poems make you shout.
You try to check them you like a scout.
But I see you running about.
Skill is what my poems won't do without.

My poems don't shift.
They rhyme perfectly like the card on a birthday gift.
Your eyes turn black when you see my post.
Your face turns white like a ghost.

Looks like we are taking a trip back.
Hopefully this time we won't use words like whack.
Lets keep on running on this endless track.
Until someone makes a deadly attack.

You should learn how to count.
Sammy + Cano just don't amount.
To me, they are nowhere near the peek.
None of them even had the technique.

They were to weak.
Unlike my rhymes, that are too sleek.
Truly Unique.
Look at wolf hes rhyming at his peak.

Notice how I didn't say prime.
You stole that from a rap, don't you know that's a crime?
I bet you will say it next time.
But if you do Mt. Everest you will have to climb.

I just want to quote something I think is funny.
No not even the part about how I run away from Chris like a bunny.
I won't quote that one though, you should be glad.
I quote this one that would make Sammy feel bad.

Quote :
i can predict what your ext poem will be like
It'll say something how i shouldnt talk on the mic
Or how my rhymes can make Neil fall off his bike
Or you might say that i should quit and take a hike

If I was an English teacher that would be a big X.
You just failed all the school subjects.
As a rhymer this is a disgrace.
After that I would be scared to show my face.

I wouldn't be surprised if that was something you erase.
Aren't you trying to set a pace?
Those rhymes just burnt you and put your ashes in a vase..
But enough about how bad it was lets get to the chase.

It will be well done for me.
But I will have to disagree.
You vs Me, will end up bad for you I can guarantee.
A dare you to set a date, a time and there I will be.

Lets see how easy this is for you.
You say that its simple to do.
I'll admit its not hard.
I could make up these rhymes while I'm out in the yard.

I'll bring this to a stop now.
Take my bow.
And say my vow.
To let you win is what I will never allow.

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PostSubject: Re: Poems Game   Wed Jun 03, 2009 1:59 pm

Damn right Wolf!
You tell'em!
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